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Thursday, July 5, 2018

Wacky story

Would happen if I put a massive jet engine on my dirt bike.

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It was a boring afternoon I was in my bedroom and it was as quiet as a Fox. No one was around my house but the neighbours were home next door. I sneakily travelled into the garage so that the neighbours didn’t hear me. I didn’t want them to hear me because Mum had asked them to look after me and make sure that I didn’t get into any kind of trouble! You see, i’m well known for getting myself into trouble. I like to do things, that are a little bit crazy!

Anyway.. I thought to myself what would happen if I put a massive jet engine on my dirty  blue dirt bike.


I quietly push my dirty blue dirt bike to the plane scrap yard. It was as messy as my bedroom. I went up to the guard and and asked him if I could have a Massive jet engine that would fit on the back of my dirt bike he said “Yeah come have a look around I think i,v got one left” I said “thanks.How much does that cost”He said “Its free”I said “thanks” He helped me strap it on.Then I went to a flat road that was as flat as a table but I forgot that at the end it has the steepest hill in New Zealand.I started it up and fall gassed it all the way. I went all the way to china.I landed in a dirt bike race the jet was sill on and I went flying threw the red silk ribbon.I won the race somehow.  

6 comments:

  1. I really like the way you described how quite you where. how did you get to china. this remind me of the time that I had a dirt bike.

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  2. i love the how you described all most everything

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  3. i like your your dirt bike story it has lots of detail

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  4. Hi Mitchell it's me Nolan, I liked your jet engine story because when I read it is like a book because I just want to find out what happens next. This what you can improve on fix the spelling because it takes a while to know what you're saying, This reminds me of my wacky story My one had a rocket attach to a go-kart to catch a walking bull running 100 miles per hour.

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  5. I like the way that you have shown us by using your words what your motorbike looks like.. it's dirty and its blue. The character/person makes me think of you! I know that it's you because you said in your story 'I'. Your next step might be to put 3 more jet engines on your motorbike and see what happens!!!

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